Empty Spaces (Part Nine)

Title: Empty Spaces (Part Nine)
Author: Mara
Rating: R (to be safe)
Warnings: AU, some Violence and Language. Sex in later chapters (Not much worse than on the show)
Summary: Kirsten Nichols and her son Ryan have always been fine on their own, so have Sandy Cohen and his son Seth. But now everything's starting to change for both families, some of it for the better, some of it for the worse.

Part Nine
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Yes! I am indeed back! And while the computer is still ever so slightly wonky (Pop-up blocker is iffy about blocking them, certain websites close the browser...) it works SOOO much better now! No more taking 30 minutes to restart! No more other major wonky-ness! lol... and bonus! They didn't have to wipe the harddrive and start all over, which means I didn't lose a whole bunch of clips I had, which means I can make some vids that I wouldn't have been able to otherwise but the sources of the clips are long gone... lol anyway, I am back! lol

Heavily Broken (Chapter Thirty Three)

Title: Heavily Broken (Chapter Thirty Three)
Author: Mara
Rating: R
Warnings: Sex, mentions of rape, violence. Language.
Summary: Ryan didn't call Sandy after Dawn kicked him out, but he still finds his way to the Cohen family.
Notes:

Chapter Thirty Three
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Random HB related talk... lol

Ever had a sudden and totally huge-ish revelation about a fic your writing? lol...

I had one plan for 'Heavily Broken', and I knew it would be an extremely unpopular turn of events, both for readers and if I was a reader instead of the author I'd be pissed about it... so I was somewhat iffy about it...

Then, tonight I'm listening to my HB soundtrack, and it hit me that there's a way I can totally change my original plan, without having to change any of what I've already written! lol... my new plan, which I have actually begun to type out a summary of to help me remember the little details, is so much better and makes more sense overall, and gives so much more angst but also creates so much more Cohens/Ryan time and interaction...

I do need to kind rework my soundtrack, though, which sucks because I'd already made the back cover that has the track listing on it, and some of the songs no longer work as well.... unless... okay... I'll have to relisten to those last few songs and figure it out because they might just work with the new plan, just for different reasons than they worked for the original...

I think people will be very happy with the new plan for HB... I'm totally giddy with excitement over it... lol... I'm gonna work on plotting out as much of it as I can tonight (I have up to Chapter 40 written, so I think I can afford to not write any new chapters for a night... lol)

Anyway... just felt like bouncing more publicly... lol

Later!